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0 pointsaerovistae4y ago0 comments

I actually did check this out about a year ago. It started off beyond hilarious, I thought it was the greatest thing ever. The beginning is worth reading by any measure.

Then it started trying to heavily incorporate elements of the plot of Ender's Game and went a bit off the rails. The poor quality of writing combined with the tediously pointless plot tangents lost my interest. The idea it was getting at was fascinating - finding the source of magic - and I've been meaning to try reading it again by skimming past the Ender's Game nonsense and back to where the plot hopefully gets back on track.

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MerelyMortal4y ago

Having read Ender's Game half a dozen times as a kid, I never got that vibe from the story. I've only read HPMOR once (it's super long), but if there's bad writing, I didn't notice it because I was so engrossed in the story.

aerovistaeOP4y ago

I'm referring to the subplot where Harry and Malfoy start organizing the other students into armies and having them battle on the grounds outside the castle.

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0 pointsaerovistae4y ago0 comments

I actually did check this out about a year ago. It started off beyond hilarious, I thought it was the greatest thing ever. The beginning is worth reading by any measure.

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MerelyMortal4y ago

aerovistaeOP4y ago

I'm referring to the subplot where Harry and Malfoy start organizing the other students into armies and having them battle on the grounds outside the castle.

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