It's a start, but "What you'll get" needs much more specificity than "A good salary. Tell us what you're looking for."
It would be best to see a specific "We expect to spay $x to $y for this position". Even "Our salaries are in the 80th percentire (based on data from A, B, C)".
This doesn't even try to say, "We'll pay you well", it says "We'll bargain you down."