> trying to revolutionize
There are a lot of aspirational companies out there. I'd rather work at an aspirational company than one with no vision at all, but you still need to convince me that there's an actual chance you can deliver on this vision. If you told me you were going to revolutionize the world's energy sector with a perpetual motion machine, I'm obviously passing. Treat me like an investor -- convince me your company has a future. Because, of course, I am an investor; I'm considering investing a large percentage of my professional life in your company.
> nuclear power deployment performance
Nuclear power is interesting but highly regulated. If I come up with new and interesting ideas that contribute to this space, is it too tightly constrained by regulation to have any chance those ideas could get applied? Will I be in a position where anyone will actually listen to my ideas, or have you already made up your mind about how everything is going to work? Am I going to get to talk about the product development, or is this going to be handed down to me with people taking offense if I try to explain why that latest change doesn't make sense with the rest of the application?
And what is "deployment performance" -- trying to cut the costs involved in building and deploying new nuclear power plants? If it is, just say that. Don't make me guess what your company actually does, because I'm going to guess using my priors, and as you probably guessed from my other comment, my priors are very negative.
> a highly customized PLM app
Two red flags here: "highly customized" -- I'm a software developer. I write code (among many other things, of course). What does "customized" mean? Are you building this in some other inner platform? "Customized" sounds much weaker than just plain new code. Will I find Apex code built on SharePoint or something awful like that? "Customized" is a huge red-flag word for me because it's almost exclusively used by people who are afraid of programming and don't understand the software development lifecycle.
The other red flag: "app". You're trying to "revolutionize nuclear power deployment performance" with an ... app? Look, I get that "app" is just short for "application" and therefore could mean anything, including an advanced industry-centric analysis tool. But it doesn't, does it? You wouldn't use the word "app" for that. So you're trying to revolutionize nuclear power with a $2 app in the Apple Store or something? That's what it sounds like to me.
Again, think of me as an investor. If that's your elevator pitch, I've come away with the message "big ideas with absolutely no idea how to deliver on them".
