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0 pointstailspin20192y ago0 comments

It comes across as a bit “wordy” hence maybe triggering some people’s AI “spidey senses” - including mine originally!

So perhaps more editing was needed, to distill the message.

If English is not your first language then it’s pretty damn good in that context :)

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Thanks for the feedback! That's a great point.

I'll try to work on making my writing more concise, based on the comments here.

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0 pointstailspin20192y ago0 comments

It comes across as a bit “wordy” hence maybe triggering some people’s AI “spidey senses” - including mine originally!

So perhaps more editing was needed, to distill the message.

If English is not your first language then it’s pretty damn good in that context :)

Thanks for the feedback! That's a great point.

I'll try to work on making my writing more concise, based on the comments here.

j / k navigate · click thread line to collapse