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0 pointsrrr_oh_man1y ago0 comments

> How would you rephrase it?

> I'm also a non-native English speaker, and the bit you provided sounds very easy to understand because of how it's phrased.

Thanks for your point. It felt to me like reading overly verbose code. Not wrong, but not effective.

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Thanks! Your edit is good, more concise in the first half, and even easier to understand in the second half, compared to original.

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