This seems less about showing tech and more about getting people to try your product.
I think the first improvement you should prioritize is replacing the current content with your own text. This is slop filler that tells me nothing.
"Its not an x problem, its a y problem" where both x and y are not related.
Even the title is AI generated. I've asked Claude for inspiration often enough that it loves the ", finally" and "stop doing x".
If you don't care, why should I
