* It assumes you have the directory locally. Can't it be downloaded from phpfog?
* It doesn't say anything about copying environment variables.
* It doesn't talk about making sure you have at least as much system resources. It should say how to find how much memory you had with phpfog to make sure you have enough with appfog.
* It doesn't cover data migration.
* Even without covering data migration, it could at least have covered migrating the database configuration, but it doesn't.
* It leaves with an appfog domain name. It should say how to switch them.
* Too much of the post is devoted to going through AppFog's features.
* It has some cheesy marketing for AppFog like "af-plus-php-equals-win" and "Lots more functionality where that came from".
I don't think I could bring myself to call it a migration tutorial.