You're right, I definitely need to work on the copy, and the landing page in general.
Evernote and Google Docs are both great, but their interfaces are too cluttered for me and using them simply doesn't come close to using a good paper notebook. It just isn't as delightful. A physical notebook has its own drawbacks however (don't want to carry another item around with me, it's difficult to organize it into different sections, etc.), so I knew I had to create a software solution. That's my vision for Flownote.